I found my navy blue 0.7 Zebra Sarasa pen! In celebration, I'm writing more of "Take Five" - but it's been a while, so here's a bunch of links so you can remember what happened. (And yes, I realize that you could just go click on the "Take Five" label at the end of this post and see them all on one page, but they'd be in reverse order, and I hate reading like that. But you can do it if you want to. I can't stop you.)
Part One
Part Two
Part Three
Part Four
Part Five
Part Six
Part Seven
Part Eight
Part Nine
Part Ten
Part Eleven
Part Twelve
Part Thirteen
Part Fourteen
Part Fifteen
Part Sixteen
2 comments:
Just read through them all, and it's honestly not bad stuff.
The subject is fun and interesting, and you've got good characters with natural tension. So far a recipe for success.
As with anything, I noticed a few things that could be polished and tweaked, but this is pretty much an early draft, no?
Yeah, this is the very first draft... I'm not even editing as I go, which is odd for me. It's sort of morphing into a soap opera, but I'm having fun with it. And that's really the point for me right now - have fun writing!
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